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--- en:charte [2017/01/07 20:12] – [We are all volunteers] Domperss
+++ en:charte [2017/01/07 20:17] – [The project is based, above everything, on the concept of freedom] Domperss
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 ===== The pleasure to build together is an essential driving force =====
-  - Pay attention to the contributions of others. In addition to motivating every participant, you’ll enrich each others through these exchanges.
+  - Pay attention to the contributions of others. In addition to motivating every participant, you’ll enrich each other through these exchanges.
-  - Your contributions only make sense if others appreciate them. Hence, address the remarks, they’re meant to help you give the best of yourself.
+  - Your contribution only make sense if others appreciate them. Hence, address the remarks... they’re meant to help you give the best of yourself.
-  - Everyone can make his contribution, it being to correct a comma or to help configure a forum… Everything counts!
+  - Everyone can make his/hers contribution, may it be correcting a comma or to helping configure a forum… Everything counts!
-  - Contributing is also a mean to learn new things: learn the lojban, tell stories, use a wiki, etc.
+  - Contributing should also be seen as a mean to learn new things, for ex: learning the lojban, telling stories, use the wikis, etc.
-===== The project is based, above everything, on the concept of freedom =====
+===== The project is based ..above everything.. on the concept of freedom =====
-  - We invite everyone to prefer free licences, for artistic work as much as for software production.
+  - We "invite" everyone to prefer free licences, for artistic work as much as for software production.
-  - We request everyone to accept the personnel freedom of everyone else, whether it be to affirm the paternity on some works or to make a personal profit on this shared work.
+  - We "request" everyone to accept the personnel freedom of everyone else, whether it be to affirm the paternity on someones work or to make personal profit on the shared work.
-  - We accept that the founding choices be discussed, as long as this freedom in principle is not challenged.
+  - We accept that the founding choices to be discussed, as long as this freedom in principle is not challenged.
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