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-The welcome page of [[https://khaganat.net/wikhan/en:start|Khaganat]] introduces some concepts.
+The welcome page of [[https://khaganat.net/wikhan/en:start|Khaganat]] already introduce some concepts.
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 ===== What Khaganat is =====
-Khaganat aims at creating a MMORPG that is as free as possible. Free in all the possibilities that are given to the players(but that is something every MMORPG will try to offer).
+Khaganat aims at creating a MMORPG that is as free as possible. Free in all the possibilities that are given to the players (even that is something every MMORPG will try to offer).
-Also free in its code and in its graphical resources, even in its universe, in its history, in the tools **AND** provided to modify it and make it grow.
+Also free in its code, its graphical resources, its universe, its history and in the tools provided to modify it and make it grow.
-It is also a social and economical experiment. The Khaganat’s participants explore concepts not usually used in video games, and hence we bet that "a game fully accessible" could generate a positive economy((Yes, you can use Khaganat’s drawings on T-shirts, and sell them without giving royalties to the project… and it’s only one possibility among thousands of others)) and constructive human exchanges based on sharing and good-will rather than on constraint and secrecy.
+It is also a social and economical experiment. The Khaganat’s participants explore concepts not usually used in video games, and hence we bet that "a game fully accessible" could generate a positive economy ((Yes, you can use Khaganat’s drawings on T-shirts, and sell them without giving royalties to the project… and it’s only one possibility among thousands of others)) and constructive human exchanges based on sharing and good-will rather than on constraint and secrecy.
-In concrete terms, if the player community want's a patch, it should create one and install it. If everyone wishes to see a new race appearing, then "every talent" will be solicited to create a history for this new race, and then to integrate it in to what already exists, even to create its visual appearance, to animate the 3d models, to add it into the server, and also discover the new events which are related to it.
+In concrete terms, if the player community want's a patch, it can create one and install it. If everyone wishes to see a new race appearing, then "every talent" will be solicited to create a history for this new race, and then to integrate it into what isalready existing, even to create its visual appearance, to animate the 3d models, to add it into the server, and also discover the new events which are related to it.
 Everyone **has to**, and **can** decide what he or she wants to do, for ex: